The Official Writing Challenge
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07/25/19
A neat little poem! I would suggest some polish on your meter and rhyming since you set a pattern early on. Good job though - it was a fun read!
07/25/19
An enjoyable poem...nice take on the subject.
Cute poem describing the topic. Some mud is used for baths, but I cannot see myself getting into a tub of mud that someone else has been in. Just yuck!
07/29/19
Good message!
Blessings~
08/01/19
Congrats!
Blessings~