The Official Writing Challenge
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Interesting story. I'd never heard of the term "invigilation " and had to look it up.

Interesting concept of grading our life, and so glad It does not matter to God!
You started out with a great story. One thing I'd suggest, instead of using the word invigilate twice in same paragraph, maybe use proctor or another word. I was curious to see if the MC would report the student who admitted to cheating. I thought that was going to be the main conflict. It suddenly switched from an interesting story to more of a sermon. There's nothing wrong with that at all, it's just not my favorite way. I like to draw my own conclusions. I did like the part about settling for a C. It's a great mesaage and very relevant in the world today.