The Official Writing Challenge
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I guess it really is just a thing to God. But it sure can be a BIG think to us!
It seemed that my mind switched like I had picked up a different book and was reading it for the last part of your article but the last sentence brought me back to what I started out reading.
A good reminder of how God has everything in control, even things that seem big to us! I liked the comparison to children asking their parents for something.
This is a great message. I like the examples you gave. I'd urge you to avoid using the topic word in your article. Some of the best entries never use the words, yet are still spot on topic. (Although to be fair, many people this week used the words. I think they were afraid it might be off topic.) Topic is only one of the things judges rate the entries on though. You have a nice beginning and ending and a clear message. Good job.