The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! This is well-written and thought-provoking. Good job!
This is well written. However, it may pack more punch if you put the reader IN the story through one of the disciple's POV. Just a thought!
Your writing has a nice flow to it, and is very succinct. You showed us how Jesus never asked idle questions. He did not waste any of his words. Will we ever learn? Some, maybe, hopefully. It takes surrender of our own rationale and submission to his higher thoughts.
Back in the 1960s, there was a song called "Where have all the flowers gone?" The ending lines were "When will they ever learn?" It sounds like we don't ever get it. You covered a lot of stories in this entry. For me it would have been better with less verbiage to express your point, because I started skimming through it all. But you definitely well covered the topic.
You got my attention - Love the Message. Also right on topic. Well done.
Congratulations on your 1st place finish in the Intermediate Division, Catherine.

Jesus really does want us to think about the answers to the questions He asked over 2,000 years ago. The questions are just as relevant today as they were then.
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