The Official Writing Challenge
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06/06/19
I love that you have let us listen in on the conversations between you and the Lord. I GET this. I've had these kind of unbelievable conversations, so know they ARE believable--but very difficult to convey. Thank you for letting us eavesdrop.
06/06/19
This article is relevant to ALL of us who believe! It's well written. However, to make it stellar, I would suggest you SHOW more emotion, rather than explain it. This will impact your readers even more than it already does. Well done.
Very nice article, and it does work to pray for a future mate. It works very well.
I'm curious to know if you ever received that husband! I prayed years and years for one and it never happened. I do believe that if it's meant to be, it will happen. Good use of the topic.
06/08/19
I love how you have written this. Your heart, your doubts, your honest questions. I have found He answers all of the questions of our heart. And you have a glimpse at hope! Yes, I write on hope..it has been my word for the past five years.
Engaging and well written - I thoroughly enjoyed this honest piece of your journey. Blessings