The Official Writing Challenge
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05/23/19
This is good storytelling. You grabbed my attention immediately. I hope you are writing a family history to share with all your family and beyond. So many stories could be told from diaries and notes in the margins of Bibles! Good job!
Fascinating story! I did have to read the ending a few times to understand exactly what happened, but that's just my brain confusion setting in after reading so many stories! Like Edy said, I hope that you are keeping a record of her stories!
05/27/19
You have inherited your great-aunt's gift for storytelling! Her empty diary pages tell more than some of the pages she filled.
05/27/19
Oh my! Sadness in why she quit writing in her diary but such an intriguing story about an adventerous woman. Well done.
05/30/19
This has a very authentic voice. I felt more and more like Aunt Marty was someone I wish I knew. The pacing is excellent and the twist was touching and insightful. Great job!
05/30/19
CONGRATULATIONS!!!! A well-deserved win!
05/30/19
CONGRATULATIONS!!!! A well-deserved win!
Congratulations on ranking 1st in your level and 18th overall. Happy Dance!