The Official Writing Challenge
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05/23/19
This fits the bill for a "Diary" topic, and is creatively clever to boot! I love the responses from "Brownie." You are a delightful writer to read. You are a winner in my book.
Very creative take on the topic. For me, I got confused with all the different conflicting sentences. I think I figured out that it was the writer and the diary. Is that correct? Perhaps if the dialogues had been separated, it would have been easier for me to "get it." I can see where a diary could be considered a god to the writer. This is a fascinating read, and with a bit of cleaning up, would be a winner! Keep writing- you got this!
05/25/19
A great, original take on the subject. I loved it.
05/27/19
I loved this conversation with the MC's diary, even naming the diary.

The only red ink would be to separate into paragraphs the writer from the diary like you would conversation with people.

I like the humor in Brownie's responses and especially like the suggestion to write about God and Brownie would remind the writer of God.
05/27/19
Creative take on this week's topic...a conversation with your diary. Enjoyed it.