The Official Writing Challenge
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05/16/19
A really good story with good writing. God bless.
Oh, what a great story with an unspoken moral. Well-done!
05/17/19
I liked how you wove the moral of the story in. The conversations were well done too. Good job!
You definitely captured the senses with your 'sick' description.
Blessings
05/25/19
Good description of Thandie’s feeling ill. Good job of reflecting the Scripture verse in Wezi’s response.
05/26/19
Congratulations, Lusungu! Keep up the good work!! Great character development and realistic dialogue. The moral of the story came through loudly,clearly,and creatively.