The Official Writing Challenge
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I feel like I've eavesdropped on this little family- great dialoging!
05/20/19
Sounds like something that could really happen. Realistic dialogue.
I kinda thought (with what mom wanted to eat) you were going to reveal she had the Egyptian Flu (you know - the one that makes you a mummy :P)
Great dialogue Blessings
05/26/19
Congratulations! A creative take on the topic and very realistic window into family life. Great job!