The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 101 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
05/16/19
Lovely
What a sweet story! I liked how your use of words let it be known the time and place of this piece, without having to say it outright. Well-done! I liked how the scented breeze inferred that Grandma knew. Beautifully written!
Here are the bones of a great story. I give you the 'show don't tell' comment that is always in my head now as I write. It would have been lovely to have met even 1 such participant and see their journey from sickness to help because of the MC and her vision. Blessings
05/25/19
Strong, vivid descriptions.