The Official Writing Challenge
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A lot of thoughts went into this little poem!
There isn't consistency in the rhyme pattern - which makes it a bit difficult to fully grasp your deep thoughts. Keep writing! Blessings
05/14/19
Good ideas and thoughts...we do face consequences for our actions. Keep working on your cadence and rhyme. On the forum board they have some writing lessons and I'm sure there are some great tips on writing poetry. Keep writing.