The Official Writing Challenge
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When I was a teenager, I planted tulip bulbs. After a long wait, I dug them up to see why they did not sprout. Apparently, I had planted them upside down. I've never had luck growing things! I liked your devotional on starting over when seeds not functional.
Great bones of a fantastic devotional here. To really grab us at the first sentence - and keep us with you throughout the journey to the awesome message- try storytelingl instead of just telling. For example - Describe going to the garden anticipating seeing the little plants...what do you see, hear, touch, taste, feel?
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05/14/19
"Garbage in, garbage out." I've said that to my own children and grandchildren. Lots of good thoughts straight from the Word of God and your heart. I would encourage you to watch your verbs tenses...some were past tense, some present tense. Good job. Keep writing.
05/14/19
Actually, now that I reread it...you're okay with the verbs.
05/15/19
I enjoyed this - you made some good points and gave food for thought. Well done. Keep writing.