The Official Writing Challenge
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04/18/19
This is a well-written devotional suitable for publication. If it is more than 300 words, I see some duplication that could easily be eliminated, cutting down your word count.
04/21/19
Lovely, great and powerful message. Thank you!
Blessings~
Good job on this devotional. I like to do them, too.
04/22/19
Ahhh, sometimes I feel so spiritually clumsy and I fall. Good message and well developed and well written.
This is a great devotion with a powerful message. I understand why you had the repetition, but some of it felt like too much for me. However, I think you did a great job of writing on topic. This would be a great devotion to submit to FW daily devotion which reaches thousands of people each day. Good job.