The Official Writing Challenge
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04/18/19
I loved how you developed this and showed how beautiful the experience was - something we can fear feeling awkward about.
04/18/19
This is a very clear description of your personality and personal experience-- not an easy thing to accomplish. Well-written.
04/19/19
Good job with what can be an "awkward" topic. You gently made a very clear point.
Beautifully written.
04/21/19
Thank you for sharing with us your beautiful "life" affirming experience...
Wonderfully written too!

Blessings~
I've been where you were, and understand what you felt. Great job of describing your experience.
You did an awesome job of pulling me in. I liked the internal conflict and was eager to see it's resolution. For me personally, I think you told or repeated your message at the end, but you didn't need to spell out the moral of the story because you did such an outstanding job of showing it with your great word choice. I think this is spot on topic and has a great clear message. If you haven't ever submitted a piece to FW daily devotions, this would be a great one to submit. The devotions go to numerous websites and thousands of emails each day. Your piece needs to be read by as many people as possible.