The Official Writing Challenge
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I can totally relate to this. Time is so fleeting. I had to laugh last week because the doctor told me at 53, I was too young to have a shoulder replacement, yet my shoulder doesn't feel young.
My biggest suggestion would be to set the scene before you start the dialog. I've heard experts say to never start a story with dialog because it can make the reader feel confused or like they are intruding. I don't always agree, but in this case I do. I really thought it was going to be one of those jokes kids say when you repeat words it sounds like something silly. I like your message a lot. It's one I needed to hear desperately today. I've had a rough week and you reminded me of what is ahead of me. I can't tell you how much I appreciate that. The verses you chose fit nicely with your message.
04/11/19
I thought the connection between beginning and ending of the piece was smart and well-done.
A good reminder that God is to be our strength where we are weak. There is nothing like age to get us to that place. Enjoyed the entry. Good job.
04/12/19
Well done, I appreciated reading this, especially as I age and have been dealing with many issues.

Thank you,
Blessings~
I knew you were at the audiologist, as I take my mom there on occasion. I love how you end with the say eternity!
04/16/19
I am much older than the writer but I am young in heart