The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 99 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
03/14/19
Nicely done,
I loved this entire piece.
Blessings~
03/14/19
This poem flowed nicely and had a very good message. It felt like a huge jump (chronologically) to go from Abraham to Jesus. Perhaps another OT stanza or leave off the one with Abraham? But it works as it is. Great job.
03/15/19
Nice job of being straight and to the point. Well done.
This is a lovely poem. I'm not great at poetry, but it feels like it jumps around a bit, but I'm not sure how you'd fix it. The examples are great though, and it did make me stop and think, which is always a good thing.
03/16/19
I agree with Joanney. I think it would have been nice to have had a couple more Old Testament examples. Great idea, though.
This reminds me of the old hymn "Blessed Assurance, Jesus is Mine." I'm so glad that He is!