The Official Writing Challenge
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Nicely done,
I loved this entire piece.
This poem flowed nicely and had a very good message. It felt like a huge jump (chronologically) to go from Abraham to Jesus. Perhaps another OT stanza or leave off the one with Abraham? But it works as it is. Great job.
Nice job of being straight and to the point. Well done.
This is a lovely poem. I'm not great at poetry, but it feels like it jumps around a bit, but I'm not sure how you'd fix it. The examples are great though, and it did make me stop and think, which is always a good thing.
I agree with Joanney. I think it would have been nice to have had a couple more Old Testament examples. Great idea, though.
This reminds me of the old hymn "Blessed Assurance, Jesus is Mine." I'm so glad that He is!