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03/14/19
Beautiful, inspiring and uplifting message.
Thank you,
Blessings~
03/14/19
Beautiful. Come what may. I love it.
03/14/19
Beautiful. Come what may. I love it.
03/14/19
I really relate to the realization that looking to God is the only way I can cope. We all have circumstances at some point where we need to recognize that.

It would flow better if your lines were more even in rhythm.

Great message.
03/14/19
A strong picture of this one's journey of faith. Nicely done.
All I can say is ... Amen!
This is quite lovely. The emotions are powerful and I felt like I really knew the MC. I did notice you switched voices, starting with I and then occasionally switching to the universal you. Since this is such an intimate piece, I'd urge you to keep the first person voice. For example Even when I feel afraid feels more powerful to my ears than you. It makes me feel like I'm right in the same room with the MC listening to the MC share a journey. This is a beautiful love story between the MC (and also each individual reader) and her Savior. Well done.