The Official Writing Challenge
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03/14/19
Beautifully written and stated.
Well done!
Blessings~
03/14/19
Oh my. What a story. My heart connected immediately. Such a sad situation but a beautiful ending. He restores all things. He makes new that which was broken and thought to be ruined. He is good. Thank Him for the scars, the experience, and His great grace. Well done.
03/14/19
You are an excellent storytelling in verse form!

I really enjoyed the imagery in the names. Great job.
03/14/19
Your ability to weave a story into poetry is exceptional. Love the word pictures and tempo. I enjoyed this tale very much. Nice!
03/15/19
This was really well done, this was my favorite part:
But God spoke up amidst the din.
He said that “You are mine.
Cease surviving on your own.
Stop your endless whine.”
Wow! I could almost hear this sung as a slow ballad backed by guitar. Well done! I hope you place with this one!
This is so powerful. It flowed right off the screen into my heart. You created some astounding mental pictures. Well done.
03/21/19
Impressive!