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03/07/19
Beautiful story. Very touching and well written. I can see your heart in it. I love how you brought it back around to "the spot" at the end.
03/08/19
Life, at times, can be filled with so much pain - and I can understand someone becoming angry at God - but thankfully, God brings us back to Himself and heals our wounds. I am thankful that in and through our Lord, we have hope in death - and being reunited with our loved ones. Thank you for sharing this story - it moved me a lot. Blessings.
03/08/19
This powerfully tender and poignant story held an authentic tone, and if so...my condolences to you.

Well written with an important message that God is always there for us and we have hope in knowing we will be with the LORD and reunited with loved ones again, and at that time, we'll never have to say goodbye again.

Thank you for sharing this with us. Beautiful.

God Bless~
03/08/19
Such an authentic ring to this story, but what a satisfying ending.

You did a fine job of taking the reader from despair to hope. Grief is such a difficult topic, but one we can all relate to.
I loved your line about the bundle of cuteness with black curls. So descriptive. Well done and so poignant.
03/14/19
Congrats!

I really thought this was such a tender story, I loved the way you wrote this.

Blessings~
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