The Official Writing Challenge
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02/21/19
This is a wonderful sermon-esque writing. I think you could refine it into a devotional:)

The closing paragraph was especially good! Well done.
02/21/19
This is a wonderful sermon-esque writing. I think you could refine it into a devotional:)

The closing paragraph was especially good! Well done.
02/22/19
Powerfully written!
I love Biblical stories, and this is no exception.
Great job with the topic,
Blessings~
Amen! So much truth here. For me, the scripture references were distracting. You could omit them, or place as footnotes at the end of your story. So glad that we have the spiritual equipment to find the battle!
Thank God, as believers, we have the ultimate victory in Christ - no matter if it is our head or the giants that gets chopped off.
02/24/19
Great devotional. Wondering if it could be condensed to 300 words. . . Your point is well made. I agree that I prefer to have Scripture addresses as footnote - so they don't interrupt the flow of words.
02/27/19
Very well thought out piece of writing. Your thoughts flowed well.
02/27/19
Confident, encouraging and challenging devotional.
03/06/19
This is a great message!