The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/19
There truly is "no place like home" and home is where the heart is...and the Bible is the heart of home.

Thanks for sharing your entry with us.

Blessings~
02/14/19
There truly is "no place like home" and home is where the heart is...and the Bible is the heart of home.

Thanks for sharing your entry with us.

Blessings~
Home is good! I felt like your piece was all over the place, and open ended. Your last line was especially telling. I know what your mean about returning to your sanctuary at the end of a day!
I think this is a great start for an essay. You've a clear beginning, middle, and ending. I'd like to see even more details, perhaps some humor about why work is different from home. I sense you might have some humorous stories to add too. You've a great start, I just want more. I'd like to challenge you to read and comment on every entry in this level and at least two more in each ot the other levels. I've learned the most about my writing by reading and leading comments on others. I look forward to reading more of your pieces.
02/21/19
Home is that special place at the end of the day. I remember that feeling after a long day in the office and getting through the traffic to my secure place. Thanks for sharing.