The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a perfect piece demonstrating the love of Christ and the faith of a fallen hooker. You surely nailed it--big time! Great job! Keep at it, and you'll go far in your writing career! Peace...
Beautiful! From beginning to end you build a great story that we can relate to shows us Grace. Great job!
Great perspective on this story.
I like reading the story from the woman's point of view. One thing I would suggest is to watch punctuation. It's easy to miss things like that when you're focused on the content of a piece. At least I know it is for me. But I enjoyed your story. Keep writing.
You've recounted this Bible story well. Telling it from the woman's point of view worked well. Well written!