The Official Writing Challenge
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Very inspirational. A job well done. Peace...
01/24/19
Spiritual feet. I like how you’ve included everyone! Well done!
Your ending brought to mind an old song..."these boots are made for walking...!" That's what we need to do to Satan.
01/25/19
You took a very literal approach to the topic, a very serious one. Because of that this reads almost like a devotional which is nice. But then I would put the scripture at the beginning of the story.

Check out the Advanced and the Masters if you get the time - most of us 'show' rather than tell. Even if you choose to do a literal take on the subject like you did, it helps to have an allegory or a real-life example.

But I do like how you incorporated both main meanings of 'Feet' in this.