The Official Writing Challenge
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Is this a true story, for it sure reads like one? You are a master story-teller whether it is true or not. Nice job! Peace...
Charming, poignant and heart rendering all at once. Well done for spreading the Gospel!
This story reminds me of old flannel graph Bible stories when I was a child. I'm not sure where the topic comes in- the pied piper reference, perhaps?
Never mind, I see it. Sorry.
I think this is a good start on a story that could be great with some development of the dialogue. Keep working on this one - it's worth perfecting.