The Official Writing Challenge
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Is this a true story, for it sure reads like one? You are a master story-teller whether it is true or not. Nice job! Peace...
01/24/19
Charming, poignant and heart rendering all at once. Well done for spreading the Gospel!
This story reminds me of old flannel graph Bible stories when I was a child. I'm not sure where the topic comes in- the pied piper reference, perhaps?
Never mind, I see it. Sorry.
01/26/19
I think this is a good start on a story that could be great with some development of the dialogue. Keep working on this one - it's worth perfecting.