The Official Writing Challenge
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01/17/19
Oh... I know that feeling. I have regrets like this in my life.
I like how you showed the topic rather through the action of the characters. Well done.
Thanks for writing this. Keep it up.
01/17/19
Excellent opening paragraph and satisfying ending. I think the story would have a better flow if the scripture verses were incorporated into the MC's thought processes, rather than sticking out in bold type. The story was certainly on topic.
01/17/19
You caught my attention with the beginning of your story. I like how you used the words of a hymn to show us "all talk." Keep writing.
01/19/19
I loved your style, your content and your message!

Excellent...keep writing!

Thank you

God bless~
01/24/19
I love the details. I have felt the same way sometimes, and this was an eye opener for me. I was convicted by this, too, with tears welling up in my eyes. Thank you for your honesty.
01/25/19
Congrats on your win. Well deserved. :)