The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh... I know that feeling. I have regrets like this in my life.
I like how you showed the topic rather through the action of the characters. Well done.
Thanks for writing this. Keep it up.
Excellent opening paragraph and satisfying ending. I think the story would have a better flow if the scripture verses were incorporated into the MC's thought processes, rather than sticking out in bold type. The story was certainly on topic.
You caught my attention with the beginning of your story. I like how you used the words of a hymn to show us "all talk." Keep writing.
I loved your style, your content and your message!

Excellent...keep writing!

Thank you

God bless~
I love the details. I have felt the same way sometimes, and this was an eye opener for me. I was convicted by this, too, with tears welling up in my eyes. Thank you for your honesty.
Congrats on your win. Well deserved. :)