The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/19
This is a great start for a piece that speaks for many lonely souls. Important turning point: God prompted you to realize you were asking the wrong questions. Thinking through the more important questions will lead you to a compelling, constructive last paragraph that will cause readers to question their own questions. That is what you want to do. This piece is definitely worth refining. (The reference to bootstrap does not work. Spaces between paragraphs would help.)
01/10/19
Great job in content and deliver, and wonderful message with the topic.
I enjoyed this, thank you!
God bless~
01/10/19
Great job in content and delivery, and wonderful message with the topic.
I enjoyed this, thank you!
God bless~
I understand feeling lonely in church, and feeling like a misfit. Not very pleasant.
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