The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/19
What a beautiful point you made in this story, one that I didn't see coming. Well done.
01/10/19
Interesting story, and it certainly has a bit of a twist to it.

Take care with your tenses - you move from present to past quite often. Also, there are missing words - it helps me to read my work aloud because then I see the words I have missed.

Also, most publications prefer that you spell out the word for numbers one-nine, and 10 above use the numbers.
01/10/19
Beautiful message! I truly enjoyed this entry, well done.
Thank you!

God bless~
I enjoyed your story, I kind of saw it coming. Making gaps between paragraphs would make it easier to read. Beautiful concept of the Bride of Christ!
01/14/19
Beautiful story. Did not see her reason for trying on the dress coming. Great job.
01/17/19
Congrats!
God Bless~
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