The Official Writing Challenge
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01/10/19
I often get aggravated while shopping, so I can relate to pieces of this where there is mention of needing patience, getting annoyed, etc. I could picture the shopper throughout the story.
01/10/19
Great expressive piece and certainly nailed the topic beautifully.
Well done!

Thank you...

God bless~
01/10/19
01/10/19
I laughed out loud at your ankle being assaulted by a grocery cart because the same thing happened to me. It wasn't funny at the time but I ended up at the doctor's office with an infection and a significant $$ charge. I loved reading how you faced one obstacle after another but somehow avoided a box falling from a high shelf, hitting you on the head or plunging your cart into a tall pyramid of paper towels. It would be a disaster if we were both in a store at the same time. Great entry!
Yes! Someone else who happy dances in public. You must be my soul mate. I liked the light-hearted tone of this, and I also like that the soup turned out well. Thanks for sharing this.
01/10/19
I loved the antics of the other shoppers, but not nearly as much as the ingredients listed in the verse. Great job.
01/13/19
You have some great descriptions!
01/14/19
Enjoyed the descriptive language. Being a cook, I cringed and laughed at some of the substitutions. Sounds like you enjoy shopping with crowds as much as I do. Great job!
That put a smile on my face. So relatable. Good job!
You did an outstanding job. You grabbed my attention right away. Your sense of humor is delightful, and your ending a surprise. I was sure you were setting me up for a flop of soup. Great take on the topic, and your Bible verse fit the Christian message requirement. Well done.
01/17/19
Congrats!
Really enjoyed this so much.
God bless~
I wondered if maybe this was yours. Congratulations on ranking 4th! Happy Dance! It feels so good to dance for you again! Happy Dance!