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01/10/19
I love the message of this piece, and I think it's one that many people can benefit from. Keep writing.
01/10/19
Beautiful job with the topic and a powerful message whom many will relate.

I enjoyed it, thank you!

God bless~
01/10/19
I encourage you to edit this into a 300 word devotional and submit it for the daily on-line FaithWriter Today's Devotional.
Interesting comparison to designer clothes! I would like to see you share about your time of low self esteem and entwine that with the clothing. You've had great growth.
This is a great take on the topic. The beginning was a wee bit slow for me. (Maybe add some humor, I'm sure you have a great story or two about forgetting to remove the tag.) I think the message was powerful. It touched my heart and I can so totally relate to that low self esteem. Make sure you put quotation marks around scriptures that are quoted word for word. I think the ending was fitting. You really made me stop and think, and that's a great thing for a writer to do. I agree, if trimmed down to devotion criteria, it would make an outstanding devotion. I'd be more than happy to help you trim it, if you ever choose to do that. In today's world, we really need a breath of fresh air like this.
01/17/19
Congrats!
God bless~
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