The Official Writing Challenge
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11/15/18
I liked your story and how you related it to how God takes care of us. Just a suggestion you used the word wildly may be very wild, I have been told to not use adverbs.
Good job.
11/17/18
Love this sweet reminder of God's care for us!
Yes, that's a cat for you.

I like how it was written for the purpose of an illustration many people can relate to.

Nice work.