The Official Writing Challenge
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10/26/18
What a beautiful way to describe a trip that isn't always everything we want, but we can appreciate the joys and efforts of those who work so hard to make it a good time!
10/28/18
Nicely done! You put me right in the scene. I could feel the hot sand between my toes :-) How blessed this wife is to have such a thoughtful, caring husband! Thanks for sharing.
10/28/18
I really enjoyed your story.
10/28/18
I enjoyed your style of writing - very much.