The Official Writing Challenge
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10/11/18
Thank you for your honesty, I too have watched a show because I enjoyed the story but there was " a little sexual stuff"
but that is not acceptable.It would have been easier to read if you made more paragraphs. great message/
10/13/18
A great message. Paragraph divisions would help. White space is always pleasing to the eye. I saw a few grammatical errors. Keep writing, you have real potential.
10/13/18
Good entry with detail and message intact.
BLessings~
This has some good points for a devotional. If you want to work it up, add a scripture.

Nice writing from the heart.