The Official Writing Challenge
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09/14/18
Solid message in this well written entry.
Nicely done,
Blessings~
09/15/18
Looks like you enjoy writing dialogue, but something is off with the quotation marks -- way too many in the wrong places. This story has potential though. It's worth cleaning up the punctuation.
09/15/18
Looks like you enjoy writing dialogue, but something is off with the quotation marks -- way too many in the wrong places. This story has potential though. It's worth cleaning up the punctuation.