The Official Writing Challenge
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09/14/18
I enjoyed this well written entry. Nicely done.
Blessings~
Loved it. It ends with "Yes, God can do it." It ends with a spark of hope for others who are facing injustice. Thank you. Good job!
09/20/18
congrats!
Blessings~
This is a heart-wrenching piece that is too true in too many families these days. It's so sad to see children used as pawns instead of celebrated as the blessings they are. I had a bit of a hard time distinguishing between the sisters some. A lot of that is me, but by making dialog unique to each character, adding thoughts for MC,and unique body language might help develop the characters a bit more. You did a nice job of writing on topic. You have a clear, precise message too.