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This story flowed smoothly and was easy to read. I would have loved a little more 'tie-in' to a Christian perspective.
Thanks for telling us your story about your best companion!
08/20/18
Interesting. Don't you wish you knew what was going on inside of Koti all that time of wandering. . . Sounded like Alzheimer's.
08/20/18
So happy to hear of the dog's good outcome. I got confused though with the dog's name. I presume her full name is Dakota but you typically call her Koti? To avoid confusion, you could have used Koti and not bring up Dakota. I'm glad it all worked out okay. God's fingerprints were all over your dog, from being lost, and eventually found. Nice job.
08/20/18
I love the sense of community in your story. My heart breaks for owners who become separated from their pets. It was good to read about a happy return of Koti. Great narrative story telling. I truly enjoyed it. God Bless.
08/23/18
Congratulations on your 1st place finish in the Intermediate category, Darlene.

I would have liked to be in Koti's head to find out what she was searching for.
This is a lovely story, full of emotion and caring. Congratulations on ranking 1st in your level and 15 overall. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.