The Official Writing Challenge
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08/09/18
This is a great story, full of good dialogue and drama. In the beginning I was a bit confused by one line: "Kelsea bolted for the stairs just in time to see her father close the door behind him." - I was thinking that perhaps dad had closed a bedroom door and was upstairs - I didn't really know where dad was in the scene. You may want to adjust the setting to make that more clear. Good job though - the comments by mom reminds me a little of the Mueller investigation, haha!