The Official Writing Challenge
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07/27/18
I enjoyed the brief, poetic descriptions of weather and its effects. I also think that a brief mention of how weather is used in scripture would be good.
This is a sweet poem. Poetry isn't my best genre and since I'm tone deaf, I won't comment on rhythm. It seems to move along smoothly to my ears and left me with a smile on my fadt. Good job.