The Official Writing Challenge
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07/27/18
Good job with the writing and organization of your thoughts.
This is a great devotion. I like how it starts and ends with Scripture. (Make sure you use quotation marks when quoting anything, and the punctuation goes inside the marks.) Although in my eyes, it was a wee bit of a stretch that the entire piece was about weather. I did see you mentioned a few weather-related things, but on the whole, it didn't scream weather at me. I was also curious where eclipses and blood moons means judgment is soon to come. I didn't see it mentioned in the references you showed. Your piece definitely makes the reader stop and think. I think your first verse was a great start to the topic. I bet you could take this and either add a prayer for a devotion (and maybe cut some words based on what word limits for wherever you submit) or perhaps add some questions and make it into a Bible study. You definitely seem to have a passion for spreading the news of Jesus and I believe Jesus may be preparing you for something you might not even be able to picture right now. Good job.