The Official Writing Challenge
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07/23/18
I enjoyed your poem and it had a great message. The meter was consistent which is important. The only red ink I have is in your first couple stanzas the lines didn't rhyme at all but did starting with the third. Thanks for sharing.
I enjoyed this - my comment is when you have random pictures and thoughts there should be something to string them all together or to make a conclusion - good start with this piece - work on it because it's worth it! Cheers