The Official Writing Challenge
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07/19/18
Ouch! Point well made.
07/23/18
I thought this was a funny little story until you hit me upside the head with the truth of it. I didn't see that one coming. Well done. Just a couple suggestions. First, ease up on your exclamation marks. I think on the Forum board in the lessons sections, Jan Ackerman has a lesson on why less exclamation marks are better. Second, a little dialogue among the pigs might pull in your reader even more. But still, this was a creative take on the topic. Keep writing, for sure.
07/26/18
Congratulations on your 1st place in Intermediate. Well done. Keep writing.
This is a great parable. I enjoyed it right from the beginning. Congratulations on ranking 1st in your level and 14 overall. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.