The Official Writing Challenge
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06/09/18
I enjoyed the poetic dialogue and can definitely relate to the way putting pen to paper ( or fingers to a keyboard) helps hear from and communicate with God. I think a last stanza about the writer beginning to write would have been good.

I also got a slight kick out of the fact that you used the next writing topic in your first stanza.
06/10/18
I, too, thought about the irony of "askew" being the next surprising topic. I liked your poem (and its message), but think you can come up with a better last line. Won't it feel good to nail it?