The Official Writing Challenge
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Very charming, the way you wrote your story. It made me want to give you a hug. Every mom has experienced your story in one way or another. Looking forward to hearing more from you.
06/09/18
Great job with the voice and storytelling. I found myself impressed with the amount of effort you went through - calling each person to verify. Well done with this story.
06/10/18
I'm laughing!! Like your title.
I love the title. It really stood out from the others in this group and begged me to peek inside. I also love the humorous way you told the story, and I admire your persistence in calling all of those people. I think I would have given up after the first two. You've related the anecdote well. I just wonder if there could be another sentence or two to round it off a little better? For example, a lesson learned? A question for readers? But I thought you did a great job.
06/13/18
Perhaps perfect parenting is a myth. It doesn't get easier as the kids get older - just gives more material to write about. Well done. Blessings.