The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved it. All the descriptive words and phrases captured my ears and senses. I wondered about the meaning of many of them, and during my second reading, I could only imagine how each person’s life experiences might interpret the meaning. Wonderful leading to the Truth and repentance at the ending. Very creative.
Great job with the imagery and artistry of this piece.
I read this twice. I think it's full of more potential than has been quite realized yet. This is worth perfecting . Very thought provoking.
Challenging; thought provoking. Well done and courageously presented.
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