The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved it. All the descriptive words and phrases captured my ears and senses. I wondered about the meaning of many of them, and during my second reading, I could only imagine how each person’s life experiences might interpret the meaning. Wonderful leading to the Truth and repentance at the ending. Very creative.
06/09/18
Great job with the imagery and artistry of this piece.
06/10/18
I read this twice. I think it's full of more potential than has been quite realized yet. This is worth perfecting . Very thought provoking.
06/13/18
Challenging; thought provoking. Well done and courageously presented.
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