The Official Writing Challenge
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Your understanding of Sarah, and then your own failures was a wonderful lesson about being honest to others and to ourselves. I enjoyed reading your piece.
06/08/18
Great job crafting this piece. I really enjoyed seeing the situation through your eyes and the way your thoughts turned inward to honestly evaluate yourself.

Note: putting spaces between paragraphs will make it a little more reader-friendly.
This is a piece worthy of perfecting. Lots of punctuation errors that wouldn't be hard to fix. We can identify with your Sarah! Good job on topic.
I really liked the way you used the two examples of Sarah to help us reflect on why people (and we) might be dishonest. The way you shared your own lapses also helps the reader to identify. It's easy for us to think we're always honest, but there are times when we too are less than truthful. I think by sharing these stories, it would help people to think about their own motives and behaviours much better than if you'd just quoted scriptures about what we should and shouldn't do. Well done.
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