The Official Writing Challenge
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05/27/18
Loved this! So believable and real, whether this is a true story or not, it is the truth.
Makes me think of a song we sing in church "...For every fear
There's an empty grave
For the risen One has overcome." Amen. Lyrics from the song "Overcome" Songwriters: Chris Brown / Mack Brock / Steven Furtick.
I liked the paragraph about what a privilege it is to have time to finish well!
This is a powerful piece. I liked how you tackled the topic. My heart ached for your MC and the ending, though a bit predictable, was wonderful. I really liked the double take of the line I'm ready to go home now. Congratulations on ranking 3rd in your level and 13 overall. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.