The Official Writing Challenge
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Really nice job with the topic and with your message.
Your poem was a piece
That tugged at my soul;
You delivered it endearingly,
And you gave it your all!
Great work, kiddo! You have the heart of a true poet. From your piece I can see a sensitive soul who sincerely cares. A fine job and well-worth reading. Keep at it, whoever you are...maybe there'll be a book one day. Who knows...? Cheers!
Very well written poem, Yes there are many kinds of trials and you covered them all.
Keep up the good work, I ditto all other comments above.
You certainly expanded my thinking of the many ways the word "trial" can be applied!