The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved your piece. It was heartbreakingly beautiful. Life is a gift for a time. Everyone will lose this earthly life. We need Jesus for eternal Life with God. You story was a powerful reminder.
Powerful and strong in content, delivery...and excellent writing.

Powerful writing and story. Very well done!
Totally love the heartbeat idea of a sick and dying world, because it really is! Strong opening. Moving.

This is a powerful piece. It took me back to my nursing days, to one day in particular when I came in to help with a code only to discover it was my grandfather. I know now that God allowed it for reason, but those days can be difficult. I liked the way you wove your story around the topic without overusing the word. Congratulations on ranking 2nd in your level and 18 overall. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.