The Official Writing Challenge
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04/26/18
Nice job!
I loved the picture you painted; beautiful words to help us see the glory of God. I also liked the format with the two exclaimed words.

I wonder if the word abound might be more fitting, than rebound?

The last four stanzas did not paint a very clear picture for me, nor did it seem to flow well.

You did an AMAZING job!
04/30/18
Nice descriptive poem with good flow. Well done!