The Official Writing Challenge
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04/26/18
Beautiful descriptive piece, I felt as if I was with you enjoying a cup of tea and cookies, taking in the beauty and amazing sights the LORD created.

Well done,

Blessings~
04/26/18
Earl Grey...that would be perfect!
I love all the colors of spring, and it is the Lord that has done it all!
04/28/18
Lovely descriptive writing.
Can I make one suggestion? "just" is one of those words, like "that" and "so" that need to be used with caution and eliminated if they don't add to the sentence. Try eliminating the 6 "that"s in your piece and I think you'll agree, it enhances it.
Nevertheless, it's a lovely relaxing piece of writing, which I enjoyed reading.
04/30/18
I felt I was watching the sun warm the roses with you. Beautiful.