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04/13/18
I can relate to your story. My son has a boy 16 and one 12. The older is impatient and is not always nice to the younger. They share a room and I know it would improve if they could have their own spaces, but not able to that now.
They are not Christians. One year I made an album with funny stories and encouragement and proverbs that I would hope encourage them to think and leave better. Not sure they read it much but I tried.
04/13/18
Nicely done. With teen/ young adult suicide on the rise this really hits home as I personally know of 3 families who have lossed loved ones.
This piece really goes to how the person is really taking what is said/ done.

Again nicely done.
04/15/18
This is powerful ! I think it would be even better if you could show us, perhaps with conversation, instead of just telling us. Describe how it hurt the parents heart, and what Reese feels. Maybe even explore why the older brother spoke as he did.
04/16/18
Powerfully written, well done, excellent message for all.

Blessings~
04/26/18
Interesting take on the topic.